Monday 18 November 2019

Pick-a-path bike track story!

WALT: To make a pick-a-path story based on our school bike track.

For Toki-Pounamu had to write a pick-a-path story based on our school bike track.
It was fun thinking of ideas for the story, but it was hard to actually write it down.

I hope you enjoy!
 
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2 comments:

  1. Ellakaye19 November 2019 at 12:07

    Kia ora Miro, this is Ellakaye and Victoria from Edmund Hillary School. We found this pick-a-path bike story very interesting. It had a lot of interesting ideas in it, we hope that we can see more of your work in the future!

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  2. Ⓝⓔⓗⓐ.Ⓐ.Ⓝ19 November 2019 at 12:27

    Kia ora Miro this is Neha from Edmund Hillary School. I really like your pick-a-path but it ended really sad because I got eaten by a chicken. Besides that keep up the good work.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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